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2012年1月12日雅思写作真题:设立图书馆的好处

发布时间:2013-08-06 16:49浏览次数:4578
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【题目要求

Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others, however, believe that it is a waste of money since the public can use the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

【题目讲解

这回试题难不倒烤鸭。冲突的焦点落在[有必要设立图书馆]或[没有必要],而不是单一的立场library PK Internet。在家使用因特网的好处太多,可是利用图书馆可以补足其功能complementary。

两个问题。引言3 sentences之后,1. 讨论二者的利弊,看中体的承段6 sentences与转6 sentences段。2. 考生提出看法,看合段的结论3 sentences。

起段引言 Introduction

开头第一句。申论主题:使用因特网可以取得各种资讯Vs.图书馆对大众有利。

开头第二句。集中焦点:冲突是两难自解。

开头第三句。一分为二:分头指引讨论二者利弊。

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作者词汇使用熟练灵活,但要注意避免拼写错误;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

It has been said that libraries serves more as a vault for knowledge than just books. Many figures have study experience in library, for example, MaoZeDong and Alexander. In the past, the right to access library was a privilage owned by few nobles. Today, most of the libraries are open to public for free. However, Some people claim that modern technology, such as internet, may eventually replace the conventional ways for people to obtain information. it is necessary to question the meaning of establishing free libraries today. In stead of answing the question directly, we may take a look at following facts: Candle deos not extinct after lights are invented. Painting is not replaced by camera. Much as we all have TV in our home, we still go to the cinema to watch film. these inventions first come into being, we do believe that they will replace their old counterparts, but it turns out that there are countless caese that can prove our misjudgement. Because, most of inventions are so attractive in specific aspect that usually makes us neglect other important aspects. In terms of Library, there are several aspects that are unique to internet. Firstly, Library serves as a place where people are meant to be quite, which creates an atomsphere for us to study and think. Secondly, the books in the libraries are carefully classified, it is totally different to the adhoc information on internet. Thirdly, The lectures organized by libraries provide oppotunities for readers to meet those highly reputable scholars face to face. Last but not least, public library is a ideal place for young people to find their life partners for there are plenty of love stories written in books. As a matter of fact, internet and library are complementary in many aspects. They are mutually influenced. The content of library can be moved to internet and library can benefit from internet as well. It is not a waste of time for government to establish free libraries.

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