高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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Hello everyone！ I am a girl form a town of Linshui.In the past, my hometown was beautiful with many trees around.And the river was clear that lots of fish played in it.Though there were small streets and the rooms weren't very nice. And people's life was poor.But we were happy at all.Everyone was enthusiastic and help each other.That's a nice days. Nowday,There are a lot of tall buildings.Most of personal cars run in the streets.The environment is polluted because of the factory.Trees and fish disappear.Today,environment is more and more important.That means pollution needs getting change.This is the basic thing otherwise our hometown will destroy.