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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；采用了一些简单的从句。
Dear Sun Yue , I'm sorry to hear that you have problem like this.I would give you some advice so that you can deal with the connection between your friend and you well .There are some tips can help you. First, you should show your care to her.Let she know though you are not in the same school ,you are friend forever.Talk with her is a good way to express your attention. Besides,you should try your best to visit her.Doing homework together ,communicating with each other is another way to develop your friendship. Of course,you should also know,only both of you are devoted to this thing can you get reward. All in all,you just need get along well with your friend.don't worry about ,everything will be ok. Lastly,hope you success. Yours, Editor
