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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
I'm sorry to hear that you have problem like this.I would give you some advice so that you can deal with the problem well.There are some tips that can help you. First, you should show your care.Let her know though the same school you are not in,you are friend forever.Talk with her is a good way to express your attention. Besides,you should try your best to visit her.Doing homework together,communicating with each other is another way to develop your friendship. Of course,you should also know,only both of you are devoted to this thing can you get reward. All in all,you just need do what I say to you.I think your friend would understand you.There is a deep connection between her and you,isn't it?Don't worry about it,everything will be ok. Lastly,congratulate you success.
