作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
I'm sorry to hear that you have problem like this.I would give you some advice so that you can deal with the problem well.There are some tips that can help you. First, you should show your care.Let her know though the same school you are not in,you are friend forever.Talk with her is a good way to express your attention. Besides,you can try to visit her when you are free.Doing homework together,communicating with each other is another way to develop your friendship. Of course,you should also know,keep this friendship is not a easy thing.A lot of time will be spent on it. All in all,you just need do what I say to you.I think your friend would understand you.There is a deep connection between her and you,isn't it?Don't worry about it,everything will be ok. Lastly,congratulate you success.