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The most interesting place where I will take my foreign friend to see I live in ZHANJIANG which city nearly by the sea,so if my foreign friend visit my hometown,I will take him to see the sea.Following the reasons for: Firstly, in my eyes,the sea which near ZHANJIANG is very beautiful .ZHANJIANG is not as other cities which have many factors that provide the bad gas,such as So2,No...So the air is very clear and the sky is more blue than other.So the sea is more beautiful . Secondly,the sea food in our city is much famous.It is not only fresh,but also delicious which connect to the village tasty.We can eat the sea food by the way to see the sea. Thirdly ,near the city there are many good looking hand act work from the villagers for sale,as I am concerned,my foreign will show interesting in those.