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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

用户的作文(系统评分66.5分
评语:

文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。

用户练习作文:

How to successed in a job inteview? most of people think ability ,education, skill...are important ways to make you win the competition. But , I think maybe some other ways also important ,more over that will let you done beautifully, Not just win the job. First , we should know that honest is the most important way in the interview . because this will be the direct way to judge someone are reliable . We always should know it . Second the key of manner is also the best way to show how gentle you are. A good manner wiil give interviewer a good signal that you should pay attention to this man , He is a grace man .Third are you profession and knowledge . Now some people will ask why put them in the third . there is my answer , Because If you just have profession and knowledge but without manner and honest who will hire you . The first and second are the key way , third and many other skills are the options. this is my opinion . In the end we all hope to win the interview to get a good job , but remember honest and manner are you good friends ,they will help you to get anything you want , Profession and knowledge will get you to the next level and make you better than before , I hope everyone will get great job they want.

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