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学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；采用了一些简单的从句；请注意分段。
Now,there are a seriously phenomenon that pirating is wildly spread at modern society. That is not surprising. there are a gigantic lure to promote they do. there are a many of factors in the follow to explain above phenomenon. One the one hands, With society rapid development and technological in false copy. Some business who make money by illegal can earn a lots money than legal way. One the other hands, Pirating books is more cheap than non-pirating books at cost and more market at school. So a great many of student's is willing to buy. The later is very important than before. Pirating books is harmful to nation's market economic.
