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这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
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As we can see in the picture above, there are two men and a bottle of milk. The bottle is knocked over and the milk spilt over. One of the man is depressed because he thinks the milk has spilt over and it can’t drink,but another isn’t sad because he finds that there are still some milk in the bottle to drink. Two men have difference attitudes to the same thing. The bottle of milk metaphorize the frustration in the life. One man is sad about the waste of milk on the ground but another is happy about the rest of milk in the bottle. In fact, we always meet the frustration in the life like this situation,but difference attitude can decide what thing is going to be. Be optimistic, we can take the courage to face the frustration and find the ways to solve the problem. Once we solve the problem,we improve the ability and we become more confident to face the bigger challenge in the future. If we always be negative about bad thing happened on us, we won’t be happy everyday and not every unfavourable thing can be solved as time goes by. So we should muster the courage to take the fact and find ways to solve it. The life can’t always be smooth. Only be positive and we can live more happily.
