采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错。
One saying goes that seeing is not believing. so it is not wise to draw conclusion immediately as soon as we say or hear something. There are some reasons contributing to this. Firstly, seeing something by own eyes does't mean the fact. we should spend time figuring out what was going on or what the whole matter it is. because what we see is just a small part of the entire thing. if we make decisions at once, it may cause some unreasonable effect. Secondly, when we hear something from others, it may includes other's own opinions in it, which means it may be subjective not objective. Otherwise, someone makes up the thing on purpose in order to mislead you or cheat you. As far as I am concerned, before we leap we should think twice. Do not conclude so easily, we'd better look it on the wise way and analyze it carefully in case we regret what we have done.
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