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作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；采用了一些简单的从句。
Now,there are a seriously phenomenon that pirating is wildly spread at modern society. That is not surprising. there are a gigantic lure to promote they do. there are a many of factors in the follow to explain above phenomenon. One the one hands, With society rapid development and technological in false copy. Some business who make money by illegal can earn a lots money than legal way. One the other hands, Pirating books is more cheap than non-pirating books at cost and more market at school. So a great many of student's is willing to buy. The later is very important than before. Pirating books is harmful to nation's market economic. In my view of . First we should rejected to this evil phenomenon from myself. Never buying and using non-normal books from illegal business. Second government should ban company to publish and sole those books and take seriously measure and draw relevant law. Only this way can we curb the phenomenon above remind and only this way can we make the world a better place.
