2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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communication is more and more important in our Dalila as well as we get up. no-ever we want to do anything, we should get a good communication at first. without it, the things we do maybe fail when we have done 99 peasant of this thing.in the other way, if we get a good conmunication, maybe we could get the thing succeed though it is looks to be failed. that's why we say communication is important for us.