2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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communication is more and more important in our Dalila as well as we get up. no matter whatever we want to do, we should get a good communication at first, because we can't do anything without patner or friends. without it, the things we do maybe fail when we have done 99 peasant of this thing.in the other way, if we get a good conmunication, maybe we could get the thing succeed though it is looks to be failed. that's why we say communication is important for us.