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There's an old saying goes like:it's unwise to put all eggs in one basket.So why? Here are some reasons I think that count. First of all,if all eggs are put in only one basket,when damaged,all eggs will be bad.and second,if all eggs are in one basket,the risk will be improved.I I I I I I I I I I