题目要求:
Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three:
1. All costs are paid by the government.
2. All costs are paid by the student.
3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that must be repaid after graduation. Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?
题目讲解:
语料库:
1. the higher education = college education 高等教育
2. the students’ loans = educational loans 学生贷款
3. work one’s way through college 半工半读
4. apply for the scholarship 申请奖学金
5. potential risk of refusing to repaying the loans 拒绝还款的风险
6. impose much pressure upon a nation economically 增加了政府的经济压力
7. come from the remote rural areas
8. subsidize = sponsor = finance 资助
9. economic support 经济支持
10. finish college education 完成高等教育
11. resolve more pressing social issues 解决更加紧迫的民生问题
12. stimulate one’s study motivation under the pressure of …… 在压力下激发学习动力
13. cherish the learning opportunities 珍惜学习的机会
14. face the risk of dropping out of school 面对辍学的风险
15. embark on part-timers 做兼职工作
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Education is the most important impact to our national development.So the question that who should undertake the duty to invest to it,particularly higher education,need to be made a response urgently. There are there choices.First of all,a great of proportion of people agree with that the government should pay for the higher education,because the government has the responsibility to support the development of a country and the education is the most vital facet as I said in the of this passage.And also,the government have the power to do so. The second choice is that the cost should be paid by all students.Because this can make the universities and colleges to be competitive,so the development of the education will be more active. However,a lot of people cannot afford the fees of the higher education in fact,so how to solve it?Some people make a motion that when all the students pay for the cost,they can also borrow low-interest loans from the government and repay after they graduate.This idea is better than the second one. For me,I support the first idea.Because the Chinese government is the most powerful organization in China,so if it were to invest the higher education,the education should be developed faster.