广东江门市福泉奥林匹克学校2013届九年级月考试卷英语作文

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I am Amy,I like trip,My favrite place is my hometown.There is very beautiful and I like it very much.There is often sunny,and there food is delicious,It makes me relax .In the field of play with my parents.We had a picnic on the grass,We are very happy.This is an unforgettable experience.