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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练使用了一些长难句；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。
Should college student hire cleaners? Nowadays many undergraduates' household income is rather high,every mouth they don't need to worry about money anymore,so they become more and more lazy,I think college student shouldn't hire cleaners,that is very shameful. In addition,for a great many parents spoil their child extremely,no matter their child is pupil or college student,they were also as a baby to take care,even though they were a college student,they still can't be independence,sometimes some of them bring or sent to their clothes back home washing,even they hire the cleaner,but in the current situation is rather ordinary,so they seem a greenhouse's baby that never to grown up,that is very miserable. As a college student should learn how to independent,diligent and save is a kind of virtue,so I hope this phenomena will improve in future.
