托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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The information continuously update from day to day. It is no doubt that to creative a product is more difficult than in the past. So some people believe that the most prominent improvement about people’s lives could not breakthrough than ever before. However, obviously, people still do not approach some fields because of not enough methods. First of all, people have to figure out the problems of pollution, but people could not achieve their goals in short time. In other worlds, there are further distances to experience if people want to sweepingly amend environment. Thus, people could also get another higher submit than ever before. It is reported that many countries have tried to arrive some planets that people could live on. But the point is that according to the technology people already have done, it is impossible for people discover another planet. For instance, the farthest planet people have arrived and researched is mars. So raising much more experts is an important mission for different counties. Another reason why I think people still cannot get the most significant achievement is the wealth gap. Given that the poor could even not fulfill their basic subsists one day. While the wealthy usually do not care how much food they wasted. Thus, it is obvious that if one country could not fulfill all inhabitants’ basic demand the most important achievement for human is only a joke. For instance, I went to a village in Guiyang. It is People that lived there only eat met in the festival. To my surprise, i saw a seventeen-year- old boy raised his three sisters carefully. Concerned about the wealthy, they go around the world to enjoy different style of lives. Thus，if people had concerned about the poor lives when they improve the development of the world, they could have easier achieved the technical peak than nowadays. In conclusion, the poor usually concern how to maintain their basic lives, and there are many environments’ problems that relative to people’ lives requiring to resolve. So people are still far away from the most vital improvement for the quality of people’s lives.