托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用学术词汇，望继续努力；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

If I have a choice to go to a place which I truly wanted. Tang dynasty is a best choice for me. I will show three reasons to support my viewpoint. First of all, I could have chance to see my favourite poet from within. To illustrate, staying with my favourite poet remove the barrier from communication us who cannot chat face to face. In that case, we could put ours creativity into practice. Satisfying the needs of interests from Tan dynasty. E.g. I would drink with Li under the bright moon, talking to each other how to dedicate for Tang dynasty. Most important is that we would have a communication, which is main driving force behind creation of poetry. Another key point is that I could enjoy a variety of delicious food rather than meticulously concern too much calorie from food. In the other word, nowadays in order to keep figure , waste of weight is a lifelong process for me. Obviously, I have no chance to choose food from all around the word. Instead, woman from Tang dynasty usually have embonpoint figure. People think that this is symbolization for a beautiful lady. There ‘s no better way to fulfill my dream stay in the Tang dynasty rather than live in modern society: I would go over the world to taste food that I wanted. So that I would go some places such as nowadays so-called xi an. Therefore, I prefer to be a resident from Tang dynasty. Finally, I could see the empress how to accelerate the society. To be specific, in Chinese history women are always not allowed to dominate the power. So I want to see a woman who obtains the respect from everyone to administer the country successful. I would see the empress promote the development of the examination. Maybe that I would talk to empress and take pictures so that when I want to come back I could share these with my friends. To sum up, enjoying poetry thoroughly and having delicious food is my love. Of course that I could also perceive the feminism achieve on the top of the history.