Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Education pays Everyone can see that above form, the unemployment rate and earnings are opposite. The people of the professional degree can earn the most earning, and the people of the less than high school diploma that it is the highest unemployment rate. We can easy found, the education pays more, the relevant earning is higher, and the unemployment rate is lower. So we should increase our education pays in order to prevent the unemployment in the future.