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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12940
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;错误句子较少,可适当增加一些复杂句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,needn't litter and paper ,you only need e -mail to someone.From this picture ,we can see a pair parents give them children writing a letter by computer online. And them can face-to-face contact .Thus,with the development ,our life more and more convenince. At firstly ,it not only express parents love them children,but also make people to learning computer.That children feeling them parents is very fashion .They maybe always talking their opinion.On the other hand,parents can make friends with student .Them can understanding.And the world can't express sometime,must face-to-face talking.In face,whenever ,parents can talking with children .That is happiness. In my opinion ,if you love ,you should be face-to-face telling them .

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