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Welcome to our club I'm very glad to your coming. As you know,our English club have more than 50 students.In our English club,you can learn English easily.Our members is students who like English and they have one dream--learn English well.Of course,some members want improve their English without ways,but we believe we can learn English well.Our English club is builded last year,yet it have devolped much more.In words,welcome to our English club.