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2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:45浏览次数:9978
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题目 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
说明 Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句式变化多样;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

Will tourism bring harm to the environment? Over a couple of years,tourism is a booming business in china,all parts of people in the would rush into our country tour,even though it drives the local economy,I think it would bring harm to the environment. For the local government develop tourism,they think what's more important is profit,so they wouldn't think that the tourism bring a certain harm for the original environment.for the tourist come from all over the world,hard to avoid some uncivil act,these uncivil act contains that cut their name on the tree trunk or on the construction ,Spit everywhere、Carelesslly throw garbage etc.in addition,the local government neglect management,as a result, our environment would become worse. So I appeal to the government should pay attention protect our environment,they should be reduced destruct the original view as possible as they could.

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