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【题目要求】
It's better for students to live away from home when they at university than to live with parents，agree or disagree ?
【题目讲解】
学校学习的好处，是不是就是老师的功能?上过课的翻翻笔记吧亲爱的们~传道授业解惑，老师的优势专业训练，互动教学过程。然而家长教育，1.家庭环境更轻松，家长可能更耐心，2.家长可以言传身教对不对~但是!有缺陷吗?1.家长可能教育比较随性，没有方法，小孩子接受起来不一定好，效率不高。2.而且家长的知识有限对不?3.家里的设备也有限。不像学校多媒体呀，同学互相帮助呀，图书馆呀等等。
作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；学术词汇稍微偏少，单词拼写方面也要继续努力；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Receiving higer education is a spcial experience for most of students who are qualified to go to universities. It is unique not only because of the advanced courses they are taken but also the experiences of leaving home and get along with fellow students. There are more than one handred universities throughout China, each qualified student may choose to study in any of them. Dispite the professional persuit, one of important factors that determins whether a student is going to study in which university is the distance between the university and his home. Sometimes, this factor matters not only for student but also his family. Some people believe that student should live away from home. Because, college life is an important phase for student who is growing in terms of knowledge and his view of life. During this period, students should learn to interact with others and develop their social skills. The best way to fulfill this end is to live away from home. Nevertheless, by living away from home, student can lean to take care of themselves and make independent decisions. On the contrary, it is not always featherble for all the students to live away from home. For example, some families in special conditions, like illness or poverty, that needs student to stay with them. Likewise, for students who have physical defect that is not suitable live aroud unviersity, it would be better for them to stay home. According to my experience, I support the idea that college student should live away from home as possible as they can. To be honest, it would bring students more fun than inconvinent, and benefit them in the long run.
