2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A foreign friend of mine is going to visit my hometown. First,I come from Xi'an,but I'm a county.In my opinion you must be visiting the BingmaYong and HuaShan,all over the world.But the HuaShan is dangerous.If you want to go there should be carefully or together with other's.Because of I wish you have a good trip.You can live my home.We will plain the trip,together.And if you need something,you must tell me,I will ask you anything,about the city.Have a good trip to Xi'an. The last,welcome to Xi'an.I hope you coming,next time.