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Dear George, Very glad to have received your letter. Now I’d like to tell you about household hotels in my hometown. My hometown is very nice. You\\\'ll live in the household hotel that is clean and comfortable. The price is very cheap. The single room is for 30 yuan a day, the double room is for 20 yuan a day. You\\\'ll have lunch with the landlord for 20 yuan each, you\\\'ll order dishes. Sometimes if you want to cook yourself, you can cook. You could swim in the sea and climb the moutain behind the household hotel. And you could do work in the greenhouse, but not salary for you. You could know Chinese culture and feel the Chinese family. I am forward to you coming. Your Li Hua.