2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中句式变化多样，同时从句使用很棒；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

Is it wise to make friends online? Today the internet become very popular in china,people can through the network obtain lots of informations,and make a friend on it,it brings much convenient for people\'s life,but I don\'t think make a friend online is wise. Recently a few years,network crime become more and more serious,one of them is make a friend online,as net friend is strange,people are difficult that understand the net friend\'s real character,so many people are harmed through the network make a friend,especially is teenager,for the teenager is rather innocent,and they self-protection awareness is worse,they easily are cheated and raped,even lose their life,so make a friend online is rather dangerous. I don\'t advocate make a friend online,if people really need to make a friend online,I suggest they should improve self-protection awareness,they shouldn\'t tell number to net friend,and don\'t go to see them.