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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；文中从句数量稍显不足，注意个别有错误的句子；请注意分段。
Judging from the table, we can see that people's income increases along with their education levels. Above all，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates. one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain from it instead of the degree itself. After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate. On the other hand, the most valuable bless would help them gain more opportunities in their career path. In conclusion, what accounts for education pays is not the degree alone, but the graduate's ability and learning habit.
