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I\\\'ts unwise to make a conclusion when we just see or sound something only once time. Many times people would like to conclude their views without deep thinking.The next essay we will pick out some examples to confirm our view. As we know,the more beautiful of the vegetables ,the more unsafe it is.Because i\\\'ts usually grow up with price.So that we can\\\'t make a right conclude just rely on the color of the vegetable. Then we need to talk about the important of the evidence. We know the judge keep the familar by many communication and evidence. If they just make the conclude without deep thinking, we would never believe in law.And the last example is a picture what I had seen. It\\\'s talk about one people with a piece of knife run by another one.But it\\\'s just a part of the picture,the really thing is that the people with the knife is kill. All in all, we should keep our mental calmly,just to think more will advantage to become a wisely person.
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