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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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全文结构较为严谨;可将文中部分短句合并为长句,注意文中句子错误;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,学术词汇的希望能更熟练一��。

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I\\\'ts unwise to make a conclusion when we just see or sound something only once time. Many times people would like to conclude their views without deep thinking.The next essay we will pick out some examples to confirm our view. As we know,the more beautiful of the vegetables ,the more unsafe it is.Because i\\\'ts usually grow up with price.So that we can\\\'t make a right conclude just rely on the color of the vegetable. Then we need to talk about the important of the evidence. We know the judge keep the familar by many communication and evidence. If they just make the conclude without deep thinking, we would never believe in law.And the last example is a picture what I had seen. It\\\'s talk about one people with a piece of knife run by another one.But it\\\'s just a part of the picture,the really thing is that the people with the knife is kill. All in all, we should keep our mental calmly,just to think more will advantage to become a wisely person.

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