文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨。
I\'ts unwise to make a conclusion when we just see or sound something only once time.Many times people would like to reach conclusion without carefully thinking.The next paragraph we will list some examples to confirm our view. As we know,the more beautiful of the vegetables,the more unsafe it is.Because i\'ts probably grow up with spraying pesticide.So that we can\'t reach a right conclusion just rely on the color of the vegetable. Then we need to recognize the importance of the evidence. We know the judge maintain the fair and justice based on many investigation and evidence. If they just conclude the case without cautious investigation, we would never believe in law.And the last example is a picture what I had seen recently. It\'s talks about one person hold a piece of knife run by another one.But it\'s just a part of the picture,the fact is that the people with the knife is hunted. All in all,we should analysis things in many ways rather than reach conclusion reckless.
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