2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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while my foreign friends come to china.I think i will take them to Beijing.Beijing is the interesting place of china. At the same time, it is one of the oldest city of china.The foreign friends will like to visit Beijing . In Beijing,the first place where we should go?Everyone will think The Great Wall.The Great Wall was build on qin dynasty.the people are visit the great wall which come to beijing.as the saying goes, it\\\'s a not good man who not want to go to the great wall.thus the great wall is worth to go.there are many famous places in beijing.they will like to eat in beijing.beijing have many delicious foods.such as beijing duck.noone don\\\'t like it.then take them to watch perking opera.let them know what is chinese cilture. in my opinion, i think beijing is a symbol of china.everyone know it,but they don\\\'t know it.when they visit beijing places,eat beijing foods,listen and watch perking opera,they will like beijing.then they will like china.that is why i want to take them to visit beijing.