雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

可是当增加学术词汇的使用，文中有拼写错误；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮。

today, in this much-travelled world, travelling has been popular worldwide. there is no doubt increasing number of people are interest in travelling because it it advantageous. conversely, other people hold the view that travelling in foreign country is harmful and unbeneficial. the opinion is varying from person to person. Some people think that travelling in foreign country is rather comfortable. First of all, people through travelling relieve their strain in order to finish thier task perfectly when they at work. Moreover, travelling is the good way to together family which can increase the harmony. Eventually, travelling can broaden individuals\\\' eye, for they can look something exotic that can\\\'t see home However, some people consider that travelling is harmful for the reason that it not only exhaust visitors but also pollute the places of interest even disturb the local people. To begin with, a long journey can not release press because it is needed to devise. So, needless to say, visitors maybe feel tired of doing so. Next, visitors those go to foreign country can not sure they will be welcoming by local people so that they may be despised. lastly, people visit foreign country, which will increase risk because of they do not kown completely foreign custom. From my point of view, travelling is necessary for people in spite of where they go. For me, every time after I went to vistit scene spots, I had felt lifting and freshing. Therefore, it is beneficial for me to learn or work. moreover, it can broaden my eye and enlarge my life so that I can lead a abundant, happy life. Needly to say, travelling involves danger, but if we can care about and doing something to protect us, I think it is profitable for our healthy development.