2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Well,I will take him to the Fang JIdao which has a long coast.Personally,that is the most beautiful place of Maoming.You must go there for your holiday if you love beach. There wherer has several famous views is 4A landscape of China. When draw is coming you can go to the beach food street which has beach bar and beach band,trust me you will love it.yeah,if you love dive go there.you can shore dive,night dive, boat dive ,also you can take a fast travel by speed boat or drive motorboat by yourself.Not only the sightseeing but also the entertainment is awesome. that\\\'s why we call it golden beach too.