小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a cute dog.His name is dudu.He always eat so much that he is very fat.He is nine years old. Recently,he has developed a bad habit.He was used to barking outside the gate so that someone would let him in.When I opened the gate ,he came in. Three minutes later,he began barking.I opened the gate again,he went out .Every time he wanted to come in or go out ,he would bark until someone opened the gate.My husband was boring with it so he removed the gate .We have not seen him since then.My huaband put the gate back and kept it locked.A few days later,dudu returned and delighted at first.As soon as he found himself could not open the gate,he became dissatisfied.After many days ,he disappeared.