单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
This is my house. It has three rooms. We have two bedrooms, a living room and a dinning room. We watch TV in the living room every evening. My mother cleans the house everyday. She works very hard. My father helps doing housework sometimes. We have dinner and supper together at the dinning room. I love my house so much.