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2013年5月18日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:关于学历史

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:09浏览次数:1306
要求:
Some people think all children learn history in school is important. Some others think learning subjects more relevant to life is important.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

讲解:

Important:
1.理解世界和未来,提高判断力,明智 2.理解变化,提高适应性 3.文化传承  
Irrelevant:
1.过去的事情 2.今天和过去不一样

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评语:

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

What is the meaning of learning the history?To help people develop our worlds or just to have fun?People hold different opinions to it. A part of people thinks that our human should never forget what happen before and learn from it.In another words,they think it is important to study history.There are their reasons for that.First of all,history can help us understand the world deeply.And then we can figure out the trend of our human\\\'s development gradually because of that.After we get the trend,we are able to know what is wrong and select the correct way to achieve our life purposes. Whereas there are large scale of people opposing that view.They support this thought:learning history is useless and unworthy.They say that we should be realistic and pay more attention to what we shall do than what we did.In addition,the world has changed a lot,and history cannot provide necessary ideal as well as experience we need,we should obtain those from our lives. I hold this opinion that history is very important and we should learn it.

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