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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1896
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
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评语:

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,不过单词拼写做的很棒;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;能够使用一些不错的从句。

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When someone ask foe help to us ,but in fact you do not have the ability to help him .how do you do with it? In the life ,we often can not help someone,because of it transcends our ability or we need to do something is more important than the help .we must say no when someone need us to do bad things.In fact our best friends or relative ask for help to us ,we often do not willing to say no . but do say no,it often make us embarrassed, we at first thought say no ,will break our friendship and kinship ,but we do not know if it can not be contracted,it will be worse. so if we can not do it, we should do not afriaid to say no .

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