2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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How should parents help children to be independent Newaday,to mush parents help children to be some thing .but children reduce independent.parents are bad for children .in order to children to be independent .parents should reduce do thing for children, one,they should study more go to understand children,they should not norey children active. second,understand them time,and so on ,