小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My goodfriend My goodfriend name is zhu feng, he is twenty-five . he likes pratise .it looks very strong. he is very goodness ,for example there is a dog in her family.he is feed the dog with food everyday,he plaies the dog for resttime .he also like to play the game exbashally the brain game .he often said :it very interesting also practise my brain and fingers.