2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowaday there are many parents very love their childrens.So the childrens don\\\'t do anything by theirself.In other word, they always rely on their parents. In my opinion, I think the childrens should be depend.They should learn anything from society.At the same time ,learning necessry skill from live and knowing what they should do. The parents which they do anything for childrens,thus they should help childens learn depend.So we should help them to be independent.