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It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket As we all know , it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. because, we maybe lose anything,including our future. It is important for us to learn how to deal with this problem. This probe is applied to the economic investion, which claim that don\\\'t invest all money to only one project, maybe we can gain nothing except despairing . we should divided it into several parts, therefor, if one of them is fail, we have others. So, we can have opportunity to gain success, make state and have healthy and so on. In a word, we should deal with this problem correctly, and learn how to make decidation.