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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10403
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket As we all know , it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. because, we maybe lose anything,including our future. It is important for us to learn how to deal with this problem. This probe is applied to the economic investion, which claim that don\\\'t invest all money to only one project, maybe we can gain nothing except despairing . we should divided it into several parts, therefor, if one of them is fail, we have others. So, we can have opportunity to gain success, make state and have healthy and so on. In a word, we should deal with this problem correctly, and learn how to make decidation.

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