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Some people say that it is too late to save the damage that human did on plants and animals.And some others has the adverse opinion.So here is the question, what exactly did human do and does is really late so solve the problem we have. As the highest IQ species of the animals on earth, human take in charge of almost everything.To survive the cruel natural, human learnt how to use tools to live a better life.Tools for hunting and planting especially cause the plants and animal species problem. More and more animals becomes to the meal in the human\\\'s diner dishes.Trees are down to meet the needs of warm and cooking.
