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2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:40浏览次数:9761
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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Some people say that it is too late to save the damage that human did on plants and animals.And some others has the adverse opinion.So here is the question, what exactly did human do and does is really late so solve the problem we have. As the highest IQ species of the animals on earth, human take in charge of almost everything.To survive the cruel natural, human learnt how to use tools to live a better life.Tools for hunting and planting especially cause the plants and animal species problem. More and more animals becomes to the meal in the human\\\'s diner dishes.Trees are down to meet the needs of warm and cooking. Now days, every small problem has become to unsolvable. Some kind of animal are die out, forest number are decreasing. And even though, human are not stop sucking from the natural. Animal species are gone and can not come back. Plant and forest are damaged and can not come back, too. So, it is too late to do some protect measurement. But we can still protect the rest of what we have. Better late than never. If the damage can not be solve, we could try to improve it. So as an conclusion, it is never too late to do anything.

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