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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8980
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,some people always judge a person by their appearance.However,it is a terrible behavior and also quite unfair to those people. Appearance is a part of human beings.It is true that an attractive appearance will make people relaxed and let them find a job more easier than ordinary people.However,appearance doesn\\\'t mean everything,it can\\\'t stay ability and behavior .So it is unwise to judge a person only by their appearance.For example,a person with a good appearance always rob other\\\'s wallet and money.We can\\\'t say he is perfect because he merely has a good appearance.Actually,he is a bad man.Some people always help others for free.Though they don\\\'t have a great appearance,they have a beautiful heart.We should respect them ,because they are the real idol. In brief,we should judge a person fully.

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