2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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welcome to my hometown ,I will show he a place named "hua guo shan",it is the hoetowof monkey ,because it's the represiventive of my hometown . My hometown is the bridge of arish of eourpe ,today I shand show you is a book have write ,the writer is wu.it's as the classical in chinese culture .