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行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。
with the development of economic and social.humans activities among in plants and animal influence become more important.so how to deal with the relationship about people and nature.I have three opinion. the first,human should konw some about nature for us is so important.second,protect our arrounding evironment and animals keep it dont be hart.finally,buliting some government charm organizations and specially social institute. all in all,to deal with the relationship about peole and nature is need whole the world human common to strive.maybe we think that is too late but i believe some day human and nature will harmonious get along with each other.
