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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3095
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意文中的句子错误;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Nowadays, the Internet is more popular and inportant.Almost everybody often surf the Internet.What's more,millions of young people have made friends online.As far as I'm concerned,It is not wise to make friends online. As we all known,everything has its benefit and shortcoming.There are several disadvantages as followed.First,the Internet is virtual,so we can't guess whether is true.Second,online anybody can be your friend,because his information mostly is wrong. Third,there are many typical cases that many young people were cheated by their friend online.Fourth,you can't make a real friend online. In my opinion,I disagree people make friends online. When we chat with others,we shouldn't trust them completely.

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