小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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As far as I can record .It was 2004 of summer,at that time I was in grade one .My mther bought a little dog as a specaily gife to me for my 6 years old birthday.The little dog was so cute.It has two big eyes and a small nose.It has very white hair like sonw.I love it very much!