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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句子错误偏多，建议修改；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
Along with the improvement of living standards,people no longer care the money their earn, but more concern our environment,because there are many pollution around us man facing a big promble with enviroment pollution,now it is time than to fixed it ,what we are going to do ? different people hold different views,some people claim than we should seldom use plastic pag
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