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The most intereting place My hometown is Jiangmen Taishan.There ane not many people know here,Taishan maybe is a small city ,but it near the sea so that it's a interesting city. In Taishan ,there are some interesting place.There are some beautiful seas.Like The Langqinwan on the Naqin,The Dalangwan,The Black sea,The up and down seas and so on. The Black sea is a special sea.Why is name The Black sea?Because there are black sand in there.Many people come here for these,they will take the sand.And they can enjor swimming in there too. I like The langqinwan on the Naqin.It's a beautiful sea.There are a big sea,and many people come here relax.Sometime,there are a Color Run ativity holded in there .It's very interesting and amazing.I wii join it with my friends,we have a good fun! The up and down sea where i have to talk.It's a travel place with beautiful views.It's a big and comfortabled beach.Many people come here during the holiday.blue sky,white counds,blue sea,yellow beach,how beautiful it is! You should come toTaishan to see the beach ,you will like here.
